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Heather (mutedtempest) wrote,
@ 2008-08-27 03:32:00

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24, completed tasks

24. Actively seek feedback on my stories and poems

March 1st, 2008
Okay, I've been doing this with "You." I've sent the past few chapters to Gemma and asked for her ideas. I did that with Obsy too, but now that she apparently hates me, I won't be doing any more of that. Lol. Actually that's really sad for me. I miss my proofreader.

Anyway, I'm sending Gem another chapter later tonight. I want to send her some of the poems I wrote last night, but I'm really scared. Stupid, huh? lol. But I do want to have them looked over.

April 3rd, 2008 - sent

darknessdee my latest chapter of "You."

Task Completed: August 27th, 2008: I think I have a permanent proofreader now. If I don't fuck it up. And I've been getting feedback on stuff for a good while now, so I think this one is done.

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	(Anonymous) 2008-04-11 08:50 pm UTC (link)
	Why does Obsy hate you? (Reply to this) (Thread)

	mutedtempest 2008-04-13 12:40 am UTC (link)
	It's a long story. Suffice it to say that I fucked up, as is par for the course. (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2008-04-13 01:32 pm UTC (link)
	So, I guess there's no chance that you guys update "Thoughts" anymore ... :( (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	mutedtempest 2008-04-13 06:35 pm UTC (link)
	sorry, i don't see it happening. i wrote the next chapter and sent it to her, but havent heard anything. :( Is this Goose by any chance? lol (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

(Anonymous)
2008-04-14 09:40 am UTC (link)

Haha...I wish I were her, then maybe I’d actually be good at something…
Anyway, you don’t know me. It’s possible you have seen some of my bad comments, but I don’t remember commenting on any of your stories.
Btw, what happened to “Marathon?” You said you might continue with it. And where is it? I wanted to re-read it (yes, I'm a perv, lol) and I couldn’t find it :(

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mutedtempest
2008-04-14 07:50 pm UTC (link)

Oh. I was just guessing since I think she's the only one I've given the link to, haha. Nice to meet you though, I'm Heather. Which you probably already knew and I sound more retarded than usual.

Hmm, Marathon is still on my hard drive, but for some reason I deleted it from the site. I have no idea why, I think I got into a bad mood or something and started deleting stories at random. I'm still not sure on continuing it. I'm just not feeling inspired with the Danish sex lately. No idea why.

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(Anonymous)
2008-04-16 09:50 pm UTC (link)

Yay, the site is working again!!!
You gave the link to the L3 recap a while ago. I was going back through the updates of “You”, trying to find a particular chapter and I came across the link again. From there, it was easy to find this.
And of course I knew your name, I don’t talk to strangers, lol... I should probably tell you more about me, but I’m just too shy. You can call me O if you want.
I was going to ask you to post “Marathon” again, but I see you already have :)
PS: Sorry about any mistakes, English is not my first language.

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	mutedtempest 2008-04-17 05:24 am UTC (link)
	Awww! To say I'm flattered would be an understatement. I'm really shy too, although for some reason I tend to talk a lot on blog comments, lol. And your English is GOOD! I'm always amazed at people that don't speak it as their first language thinking they're bad at it. Trust me, you're better at it than a LOT of native speakers! Good to meet you, O! lol (Reply to this) (Parent) (Thread)

	(Anonymous) 2008-05-28 04:02 pm UTC (link)
	I just saw that you removed "Weather the Storm" too. Can you please post it again here? (Reply to this) (Parent)

	darknessdee 2008-08-28 06:19 am UTC (link)
	I'd gladly be your permanent proof reader if you mean me! XD (Reply to this) (Thread)

	mutedtempest 2008-08-29 03:10 pm UTC (link)
	lol, well considering I show you every single thing I ever write down, I think you fit the bill. <3 (Reply to this) (Parent)